It was a huge white Church and the gay gloomy sky crowned it magnificently. Not a good sign on such a busy day.
"Hurry up soon..""Where are you running.."
"Rain is sure to come.."
"Everything will be ruined.."

He was standing alone & looked taller than usual.He was often compared with Brad Pitt ;such was his charisma.He had a small stubble in his face giving him that boy-next-door look.His greenish blue eyes always lingered even in a stranger's mind. They made the perfect pair & now they were getting married.
The time had come for them to take the dais.He was already standing there with a sensual smile.He had done this a lot of times & knew by heart what is expected of him. She walked the carpet with flowers all around.She also knew how to do this perfectly & this was like a walk in the cake.
Finally they said "I Do" & the Priest pronounced them Husband & Wife.The huge applause that followed overpowered nature's roaring thunders.
"Cut.. excellent shot madam.. "
"Very well done sir.."
"Tomorrow the schedule is at 10 AM.. and that will be the last shot of the film.."
It was the director who instructed the versatile actors & walked away with a satisfactory smile.Indeed his job was done.
The two actors were standing alone. He took out a paper from his pocket & handed it to her. "Sign it..I will get it tomorrow..& dont forget tomorrow is the last day..by the way you did a great job today.."
"Thanks.. you also did a wonderful shot..dont worry I wont forget our last day.."
she smiled sarcastically.
"Ok bye then.. " He left as he always did.
She was looking at the divorce papers in her hands. A drop of water touched them. Was that a tear or the rain?She started walking without answering.
15 comments:
that was nice... in an ironically twisted way.
That was an interesting twist.
ooops! why tragedy...?
good one.. talking abt brad pitt, i donned his role in the " who am I?" competition held in college. People recognised me as jim carrey
i would compare this post with Jeffrey Archer. well written and executed. kudos. Touching but i feel actors and actress change partner more faster than their wardrobe.
@Honey Bee
Hmm..that was for a twist..
Anyway I dont think both of them would care about these..they would be busy with their next WEDDING.
@chronicwriter
Thanks Chriz..!!btw I agree with the Jim Carrey part :)
@s4n705h
Thanks a lot..!!
Hehe I take that as a very good compliment..:D(did u actually mean it..?? )
Yup..I agree with your thoughts on actors..
I meant that. the first time i read it and it was a true Archer way of writing.
Consider me a fan of yours if you continue the same way!!
Thanks again :) !!
Archer's short stories are just great !!
Let me see if I can sustain the same way..
Santosh..did you have a look at this one of mine..??
He and She
nice story and double twist made it wonderful.. :)
Thanks ! :)
Glad you appreciated the double-twist !!
You have a flair for Twists and a lingering end !! Good read !!!
Thanks Sandhya!! :)
nice story... actors life's are cursed...
btw this might interest you..
Of fantasies and fantods
@vigneswaralu
Thank you.. will definitely check that :) !!
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